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英検1級のWで32点中30点以上目指すスレ
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0001 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (ササクッテロ Sp75-wvmP)2018/05/20(日) 17:01:13.65ID:e0w23q9Yp
10月に英検1級受ける予定。
皆さんもそれぞれ目標があるかと思いますが、頑張りましょう!
0027 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウオー Sa1f-+t5f)2018/07/11(水) 23:51:31.23ID:3195U52pa
もう少しわかりやすくするために、
パラグラフ間を一行空白にしてみました。↓↓


Though I must admit the fact that there are many people who insist that the government should not hold the 2020 Summer Olympics at the expense of the safety in Japan, I agree with the idea that Japan will benefit overall from hosting the Olympics.
I have three reasons to support my opinion.

The first reason is that there will be a lot of companies which will be able to take advantage of this opportunity.
For example, when many travelers from foreign countries come to Japan in 2020, most hotels in Tokyo will gain a big profit from those travelers.

The second reason is that this may be the chance for us to communicate with many people from all over the world.
Such an experience will enable us to know various cultures.
I assume that it will broaden our horizons.

The third reason is that this must be the opportunity to let foreign people know that Japan is one of the safest countries in the world.
If they notice that it is comfortable to live in Japan, they will come to love Japan and many of them will visit Japan again.

It is true that some people are worrying about the opinion that the number of crimes will increase due to the increasing number of foreign people.
However, we can solve the problem by hiring many guards.
I believe that the advantages of hosting the Olympics will be bigger. (239 words)
0028 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウオー Sa1f-+t5f)2018/07/11(水) 23:58:26.97ID:3195U52pa
とりあえず、またしばらく消える予定ですが、
何か↑の英作文で文法ミスなどあれば、お知らせください。
0029◆wlPIi.ym8Q (ワッチョイ 6d45-ByvZ)2018/07/12(木) 00:00:21.87ID:A6nh+6yo0
書く英文の単語レベルは、問題にされないでしょうよ。
やはり書かれた内容が全てでしょうよ。

例えば『階級闘争』には "class struggle" という
お決まりの表現があるのですが、このような現代語彙を
蓄積しないと問いに答えられないのではないかと思うのです。
0030◆wlPIi.ym8Q (ワッチョイ 6d45-ByvZ)2018/07/12(木) 01:27:15.42ID:A6nh+6yo0
>>29>>25へのレスです。



>>25
>もう少しレベルの高い文を書くことを目標にしたいと思います。

英検一級の試験に華麗な文章によるエッセイは求められて
いないのではないでしょうか?

>>25さんの文章を平凡とは言いませんが、一般論として、
平凡な内容を華麗に複雑な構文で書くよりは、複雑な
内容でも明晰に達意の文章で書ける力が問われるのでは
ないでしょうか?
0033名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイW 7dbd-usrB)2018/07/14(土) 06:17:31.35ID:r9pLEgx00
準一級の英単語が使いこなせれば外国語学習者としては最上級な気がするが
0034名無しさん@英語勉強中 (スフッ Sd0a-brPR)2018/07/15(日) 23:22:02.02ID:mXHS/h0od
単語の語彙レベルって

語彙問題≫≫≫≫長文≫≫ライティング≫≫スピーキングで良いよね?
0036名無しさん@英語勉強中 (スフッ Sd1f-nAV7)2018/08/08(水) 02:04:47.95ID:OUH2yh4Md
良スレあげ
0037名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ 03bd-aDoj)2018/08/08(水) 03:00:46.51ID:Mxau48wy0
>>27
このdue toの用法は標準語法として確立されていますが、
議論がありますのでエッセイではowing toを使った方が良いと思います。
理系論文では副詞的なdue to, based onはまずいそうです。
0040名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ガラプー KK7f-oZPX)2018/08/21(火) 16:32:43.75ID:Xhw/YJqkK
新形式から各パラグラフ毎の意見理由が自由設定だから基本準1級スタイルのまま3つ考えて25分で書き上げる練習してる。語彙は準1レベルで内容構成の観点で素点落とさなければそこそこ取れるかも。
0041名無しさん@英語勉強中 (スププ Sd43-k5CG)2018/09/02(日) 00:47:50.35ID:47f8UCSgd
>>40
準1級も意見理由が自由設定になれば良いのに…
0042名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ 35d7-Pijf)2018/09/02(日) 01:03:10.80ID:puMOBTnH0
(ワッチョイ 03bd-aDoj)
こいつ、日本語英語しか書けない糞だから騙されないように。
0043名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイW a3d7-Pn1P)2018/09/06(木) 01:24:15.18ID:GTf7oaKs0?2BP(1000)

作文なんて模範解答みたいなフォーマットで文法間違えさえなければ8割は余裕でとれる
0044 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-WqLy)2018/10/06(土) 21:50:14.90ID:JGxye6z6a
お久しぶりです!
なんか、明日の英作文のテーマで出そうなネタがあれば、このスレに書いてください!

時間があれば、書いてくれたテーマに関して簡易的な英作文を書いてみたいと思います
0045 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-WqLy)2018/10/07(日) 04:32:06.09ID:GyNakWEda
とりあえず、最近ホットな話題であるベーシックインカムについて。

ベーシックインカム(賛成)
理由1:
With the advance of technologies such as AI, the number of jobs available is expected to decrease, and the society which more and more people cannot get jobs will come soon.
However, by using the tax revenue from corporations making profits from AI as a basic income, we can save those people.
理由2:
There are many people who cannot work because of their sicknesses or injuries. Not all the people can live on welfare.
If we introduce the system of a basic income, they can receive money without asking their families to give financial support.
理由3:
If everyone received a basic income, working mean earning more, which would of course be a great incentive to get a job.
Also, nobody would have to worry about earning enough to eat, so everyone could persue their true interests, making happier.
0046 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-WqLy)2018/10/07(日) 04:44:49.89ID:GyNakWEda
今回の英検1級は、理系のテーマが来ないことを祈ります
理系テーマは私の語彙力が乏しくて書けないから
でも、最近は準1の方が理系テーマばっかりなんですよね。この風潮が1級に輸入されないことを祈るばかり

私は1級の単語は完全無対策だし、リスニングも弱いので、英作文で満点近く取れないとオワオワリであります
0047 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (ササクッテロ Spea-WqLy)2018/10/07(日) 16:07:31.41ID:C5mSv6Hwp
語彙
→dwell onぐらいしかわからなかったです。あとはほとんと全部2にマーク

長文
→わからない単語は少なかったけど、それでも準1より明らかに難しく苦戦しました。

英作文
→個人的には会心の出来だけど、humanities(人文科学)が可算名詞か不可算名詞かわからなかったので、全部助動詞を挟んで動詞にsがつくかどうかで迷う必要がないように工夫しました。

リスニング
→これ準1とほとんど変わらない難易度では?
0048 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (ササクッテロ Spea-WqLy)2018/10/07(日) 16:14:28.35ID:C5mSv6Hwp
これで受かったらネタですね、はいw

時間が余ったので、第3段落の途中までは書き写してきました。
後で英作文の答案を再現してみます。
0049名無しさん@英語勉強中 (スフッ Sd94-+2rc)2018/10/07(日) 20:52:34.79ID:DBQuDzimd
>>48
リスニングは準1と1級のスピードは
ほぼ同等なんですかね??
0050 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-WqLy)2018/10/08(月) 00:59:33.97ID:fcGeOFtja
>>49
1級の方が若干速いかなと思います。
0051 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-WqLy)2018/10/08(月) 01:35:49.89ID:fcGeOFtja
今回の1級の英作文はこんな感じで書いてきました。
30点取れれば良いけど、いくつか表現上のミスが発覚したので、よくて25〜28点ぐらいかなという気がします。

お題:Has a university degree in the humanities lost its relevance in today's world?

《私の書いた答案(再現)》
第1段落
There are so many people who say that a university degree in the humanities has its lost its relevance in today's society, but I disagree with this idea.
There are three reasons to support my gdea.

第2段落
The first reason is that academic fields of humanities are the basis of our ways of thinking, even if we have already graduated from universities.
For example, studying philosophy often improves our skills of critical thinking, and comparing our culture with different cultures can make our views wide.
These facts must be the evidence that academic fields of humanities are useful for us, even in today's society.

第3段落
The second reason is that academic fields of humanities are also the basis of other sciences.
For instance, history is the important aspect of examining economics, political science, and so on.
In addition, humanities often affect the way of comprehending sciences, such as physics and mathematics.
We can say that there are no sciences which are not related to humanities.

第4段落
The third reason is that, by studying humanities, we can become cultural people(←爆笑ww).
We can easily be hired from corporations if we are cultural people.
That's because corporations want to hire those people, and cultural people often give their corporations the new way of thinking. This will contribute to their company's success.

第5段落
For these reasons, I believe that studying humanities must be important even in today's world.
0052 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-WqLy)2018/10/08(月) 01:44:29.17ID:fcGeOFtja
>>51で入力ミス。
× a university degree in the humanities has its lost its relevance
→◯a university degree in the humanities has lost its relevance

×gdea
→◯idea


で、今のところ発覚している間違いは、
・basisやbases(複数形)にするべきだった
・make our views wideという表現は一般的には使われてないので減点可能性アリ
・cultural people(爆笑)は、教養人という意味で書いたものの、実はcultural peopleに教養人という意味は存在しない。(教養人は"a person of cuture"らしい。)

という感じです。
0053名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ aefe-6erE)2018/10/08(月) 01:47:36.05ID:TvuSTyxq0
>>51
Very good Job!
0054 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-WqLy)2018/10/08(月) 01:48:15.18ID:fcGeOFtja
今回はhumanitiesの使い方が本当に難しくて、
この単語は「主語として使う場合にtheが必要なのかどうか」「そもそも可算名詞なのか不可算名詞なのか」など非常に迷いました。

それも含めて、1級の英作文としては少し難しいなと思いました。

私の>>51の答案だとどうでしょう。
既に単語のミスが発覚してるから満点ではないと思うが・・・
0056 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-Wb38)2018/10/08(月) 13:36:53.25ID:4Ueh5x4fa
>>53
ありがとうございます!

>>55
今回はhumanitiesやlose its relevanceの解釈の時点で間違えた人が多いみたいです。
あと1級スレを見てると、地味にin today's worldという条件を全然踏まえないで書いてる人も多いみたいなので、
以上を総合すると、今回は素点平均が大幅に下がり、前回よりもCSEスコアがインフレ傾向になるかもしれないですね

テーマ自体はごくごく普通だったと思います
0057 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-Wb38)2018/10/08(月) 13:41:37.67ID:4Ueh5x4fa
しかし、教養人という単語をcultured peopleではなくcultural peopleと間違えて英訳してしまったのは痛恨の極みです

cultural peopleをグーグルで画像検索して、“インディアン”の画像ばっかり出てきた時は、目の前が真っ暗になりました

1点減点ぐらいで許してもらえないかなぁ
0058 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-Wb38)2018/10/08(月) 14:09:17.04ID:4Ueh5x4fa
特定を避けるために少しぼかしますが、
Rがおよそ4.5割
Lがおよそ8割
でした。

CSEスコアでいうと、
Rが570ぐらい、Lが700〜710ぐらいかな

とすると、Wで750〜760取れれば合格です。
素点でいえば28点ぐらいは欲しいところ

>>51の英作文で果たして28点も貰えるだろうか…
0059 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa6a-Wb38)2018/10/08(月) 14:49:21.15ID:4Ueh5x4fa
あ、表の見方間違えてた

R630ぐらい、L700〜710ぐらいですね
これだとWは700ぐらいでおkだから素点は26点程度取れてれば当確です

さすがにWは26点は超えてると信じたい
0060◆wlPIi.ym8Q (ワッチョイ 6e57-+hlu)2018/10/08(月) 15:02:46.33ID:S0lZ51rq0
>>51

性は、自慢じゃないが、出題文の意味がイマイチわかりませんよ。
出題文が悪いなぁ。これだと、出題文の意味をお仲間から耳打ち
されている人達が大いに有利になる。
0061 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sa9f-gBSZ)2018/10/13(土) 21:00:20.07ID:t4Etr6Spa
英検1級とは少し関係なくなってしまうけど、
準1スレの岩石ジュースさんにはぜひ今度こそ2次試験で合格してほしいなと思います

私が準1スレの住人だった頃から、陰ながら応援しておりました
0062名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ dfb5-I6by)2018/10/14(日) 14:31:17.44ID:khsFJFbn0
>>57
知らんけど教養ってsophisticated系の意味なんじゃないの?
文化的、カルチャーってのは日本語の意味と違ってて
大衆的で低俗なものを表す気がするんだが
0063名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ dfb5-I6by)2018/10/14(日) 14:38:23.87ID:khsFJFbn0
>>49
1級はリスニングのスピードというより
設問読む時間に対する解答時間が短いんじゃないかな?
だからリスニング得意な人でも満点は難しい
0064 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (ササクッテロ Sp9b-gBSZ)2018/10/15(月) 22:40:34.80ID:fI2IPskTp
>>62
sophisticatedは、どっちかというと「上品な」とか「センスが良くて洗練された」みたいなニュアンスだと思ってました

>>63
解答時間の短さはそれほど試験会場では気にならなかったです
1級と言えども一つ一つの選択肢はかなり短いし

というより、1級のリスニング自体、想像してたよりはずっと簡単でした
ほとんど準1のリスニングと難易度が変わらなかったような
0066 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (アウアウエー Sae2-sO/X)2018/10/22(月) 14:37:15.06ID:W88qR+SEa
おかげさまで英検1級の1次には合格できました。

R:19/41(cse:636)
L:22/27(cse:694)
W:26/32(cse:747)
です。

英作文は26〜30点ぐらいだろうなと予想してたら、一番低い26点でした。

まあでも、>>51みたいに平易な文法と単語(ほとんど中学生レベル?)の英作文で26点貰えたのはむしろありがたいと思うべきなのかな。
それでもスレタイの英作文30点が達成できなかったのは物凄く悔しいです。
今回の英検で万が一合格できても、また修行のために1次から受け直すかもしれません。
0067 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (ササクッテロレ Sp63-jt/r)2018/10/26(金) 19:07:05.34ID:G4NHdFgGp
英検1級Writingの点数の細かい内訳が自宅に送られてきました。
http://iup.2ch-library.com/i/i1945496-1540547878.jpeg

W:26/32
・内容7/8
・構成6/8
・語彙6/8
・文法7/8

内容が7点なのはまあ、>>51の第4パラグラフが変な内容なので、そこで1点減点されたんだと思います。

構成が6点なのは意外でした。テンプレ的なパラグラフ構成だと個性がないとみなされて減点されてしまうのだろうか。

語彙が6点なのはcultured peopleをcultural peopleと間違えたり、make our views wideみたいな不自然なフレーズを使ったことで2点減点されたのでしょう。

文法が7点なのは、多分、単数と複数のミスあたりで1点減点されてるからだと思います。

一応、1級英作文の採点としては甘くもなく厳しくもなくといった印象で、少なくとも準1の英作文みたいな激甘採点では無さそうです。
採点結果については概ね納得がいく内容となりました。
0068 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (ササクッテロレ Sp63-jt/r)2018/10/26(金) 19:10:07.91ID:G4NHdFgGp
1級の2次の会場は、麹町学園女子高校でした。11月11日です。

上履きが必要な上に、よりによってAM9:15スタートなのが面倒くさいですが、
同じ会場の人はどうぞよろしくお願いしますね。
0069 ◆tnTl1nZEu77W (ササクッテロル Spcd-4dbU)2018/11/11(日) 10:46:43.09ID:WkZh8hfrp
爆死
とりあえず2月末までこのスレを放置します
0070名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ dfbb-AFO5)2020/01/09(木) 22:41:43.61ID:MvCv2t7p0
泉悌二は地獄へ落ちたようだな
0071名無しさん@英語勉強中 (スフッ Sdbf-6NpD)2020/09/21(月) 20:13:52.03ID:/f65zue7d
この人、たまに1級の本スレに出現してないですよね?
なんで、書き込まなくなったのだろう、、、
0072名無しさん@英語勉強中 (スフッ Sdea-nv5N)2020/10/12(月) 19:24:05.87ID:DlQAcxCTd
せっかくなので、埋めを重ねて自前のエッセイを100本上げます。(モチベが続けば)これで30点以上になると思う。
皆さんも良ければやりましょう!
0073名無しさん@英語勉強中 (スフッ Sda2-HQt3)2020/10/27(火) 19:32:11.46ID:JlkrNN7bd
Is overpopulation a threat? (1/100)

Thanks to the technologies, the world has witnessed an unprecedented growth of population. However, overpopulation presents serious problems for humans in various ranges of geographical scale.
I have three reasons to support my views.

First, our luxurious standard of living is well beyond the sustainable level. Wealthy nations alone currently consume resources faster than the speed the Earth can regenerate and other countries are likely to follow this trend. At the global scale, resource depletion literally poses a great threat to every living thing including us.

Second, locally overpopulated areas are also subject to objectionable issues. British was used to be the epitome of import-dependance in which most of foods and oil came from overseas. It resulted in massive expenditures on sea lane defense during WWll. Also, air pollution exposure in a heavily densed area could cause severe respiratory problems.

Third, overpopulation also leads to many types of environmental degradation, some of which are typically irreversible in a long run. Climate change and global warming are very controversial topics among specialists, most of whom agree that they are indeed transforming the earth into an inhaitable one.

In light of the points made above, overpopulation is a threat. More should be done to tackle with the issues it carries and we can virtually solve them by investing money to new technologies.
0074名無しさん@英語勉強中 (スフッ Sda2-HQt3)2020/10/27(火) 21:27:43.61ID:JlkrNN7bd
Infectious diseases will become a bigger problem in the coming decades? (2/100)

Infectious diseases are natural killing machines with no sense of remorse. They replicate themselves exponentially entailing a constant mutation until there's no more hosts. In this respect, they will become a bigger problem in the coming decades.
There are three reasons to support this idea.

First, our modern world has become ever smaller due to the globalization, making every part of the globe easier to access.
In addition, our highly efficient tools such as machines have driven humans to thrive, resulting in overpopulation. This in turn has put us in a vulnerable situation where our societies themselves are transforming into a hotbed for infectious diseases.

Second, several evidence suggest that most diseases used to be or are indigenous to dense forest areas in which human contacts with those viruses were rare. However, recent deforestation and exploitation of domestic animals have led to our more frequent exposure to those viruses. Wild animals that used to be their hosts are now replaced with us.

Third, antibiotics and medicine always have a role to play good for humans but the reality is not necessarily so, especially in a long run.
Infectious diseases are often subject to mutations meaning they can be born into a totally different kind, or they can aquire resistance to most drugs. Influenza and superbugs are good examples. Our medication is still far from ideal one.

All in all, our inventions and technologies have helped us establish the globalized and populated societies. But their structures have ironically put us in a dire situation where we could potentially someday, run into an existential risk in a form of brutal pandemic.
So I believe Infectious diseases will become a bigger problem in the coming decades.
0075名無しさん@英語勉強中 (スフッ Sda2-HQt3)2020/10/27(火) 21:33:27.18ID:JlkrNN7bd
Is space exploration worth the cost? (3/100)

This essay discusses that space exploration is not worth the cost.
There are so much risk as opposed to potential profits both cost-wise and environment-wise.
There are three reasons to support this idea.

First, although space exploration has established some fundations of our infrastructure such as GPS, the benefits overall would be impractically impropotionate to the costs.
The Apollo program exemplifies this.
Because the payload of current spacecrafts is very limited, we have already done what we can do within reasonable budget.

Second, even if we managed to figure out how to exploit the resources on other planets, it could undermine the nature that has long been preserved there.
Additonally, There's no scientific proofs that the change in mass of any planets in our solar system will not affect their trajectories, which could be done by importing resources to one planet from the other.

Third, the outer space environment is harsher than we think. The biggest challenge we face is radiation, which our sun constantly emits.
No human experiments for long-term space radiation exposure has yet to be yested on humans.

In conclusion, space exploration is not worth the cost. Instead, we should focus on what we can get from Earth once again. We still have a wide range of unknown deep sea areas where we might someday find something promising.
0076名無しさん@英語勉強中 (中止 Sd33-V3nP)2020/10/31(土) 11:33:40.74ID:1/jwCoJVdHLWN
Speech: Pros and cons of zoos and aquariums(4/100)

When people ask me questions, especially of my opinion, I have always tried my best to answer with a clear yes or no.
But some of them can be ambitious because some things have evenly balanced good points and bad points, so I could not give a clear-cut answer.
So the question, "What are the pros and cons of zoos and aquariums" is the one sitting on this spectrum.
The reasons are as follows:

Pros: Animals in zoos and aquariums can attract many people young and old alike, which will then affect the local economy in a positive way.
Also, they provide the wide range of masses with general education from ecological values in nature to ethical issues centered around them.

Cons: Animals in public facilities will be caged for life, forced to live under great stress and even worse, some of them are poorly treated because of the lack of knowledge or experience of the zoo keeper in charge. It's a legally approved way of torturing animals in such a way that we do for animal testing.

To sum this up, my answer is yes and no.
Animals should be kept in a cage only temporarily on account of saving or breeding them.
And preferably released to where they came from like how Korea does for military recruitment.
Particularly, dying animals or endangered species should be so.
That way, we can spare some of them to use for animal testing. So to speak, it's a win-win situation.
0077名無しさん@英語勉強中 (中止 Sd33-V3nP)2020/10/31(土) 11:35:12.65ID:1/jwCoJVdHLWN
Speech: Pros and cons of self-employment(5/100)

Alright then, let me define the term self-employment as an intro and then I'll give my opinion followed by reasons supporting it.
Self-employment is a state of earning income directly from one's business.
This means that one has no employer to assign him to a certain position in which he will be paid salary or wage in return for his work.
He has to take risks for investments required to start up a brand-new business but he can work whenever he is pleased, or do whatever he thinks is necessary. I think it's a great thing to do particularly during times loke this with the ongoing pandemic.
That being said, I definitely feel that younger generations should try this out because of the benefits that it brings, especially in terms of taking risks and learning from new experience.

First, people who are self-employed are entrepreneurs. They run their own businesses.
They have to take risks in order to make a profit.
Now in order to make a correct investment decision, you need to carefully and thoroughly craft a business plan.
It's surely challenging because you are required to come up with ideas no one had ever came up with.
But if you succeed, it's very likely that you will be better off.

Second, Youngsters might face failures including owning a huge debt or facing problems such as their business going bankrupt.
Even if their businesses turned out to be a disastrous one, they can still easily get help from other people, especially from their families and friends.
All the devotion they made for their dream were after all not just a waste of time and money because they learned a whole lot of new experiences from these processes that are otherwise inaccessible if they didn't tried.
They can challenge again or get employed better equipped with new experiences and skill sets.
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