これは、人の英文を添削も講評も出来る立場じゃないだろ。
複雑な、分かりにくい英文を書いたらいいってもんじゃないぞ。
こんなの書いたら、俺の講師だったら、間違いなく、根本から修正される。
何書いてるのか分からない。


We, DMM On Line English Conversation School, had not given you customers a lesson until 2015 during the Christmas season and the period before and after New Year's Day, but we have heard a lot of valuable and instructive advice from customers.
For that reason, after careful consideration, we decided to give lessons during this same period in 2017 as we did last year.