僕の回答
I believe that the world will remain peaceful in future as it is, irrespective of with
many problems as gw, pe, and ed. Two reasons for this are firstly that
diplomacy is effective in solving id. US has concluded peace treatis with countries facing
with confricts, which implies the latter to be protected under US's military protection.
Second is due to the characteristics of information technology, which makes it easy
communication among different countries, which helps reduce misunderstandings among them.
説明すると、
あなたの書いてるのはくどいから省略した。とりわけ最後のほう。
For the above two reasons,...という最後の締めの文章なんていらんやろ
ところで僕が書いた
which makes it easy communication among different countries,
というのは文法的に許容できるやろか？
だれか教えてくれん？
