英検準1級スレ Part164

2019/02/16(土) 13:10:02.23

こちらでお願いします。

2019/05/04(土) 23:44:46.60

>>933
添削も考えたんだけど、どこがいいんだろうね
英ナビにあるWT（Writing Tutor）は無料だけど純粋に文法とかのチェックしてるだけみたい
自分的にはその是非を問うのにその話題を持ち出すのはおかしいんじゃ？みたいな持ってくる話題の是非も評価して欲しいんだよね
例えば外国人労働者を増やすことのメリットとして、一緒に働いて英語が学べる、っていうネタで英作文を書いても、それは幼稚だし適切じゃないとかの批評までして欲しい

あとはアイディー | 166円で英文ライティング指導。 | っての見つけた。これは安いのかな
ちゃんと英検準1級のライティング指導までしてくれるといいんだが

2019/05/04(土) 23:53:21.26

>>936
どこがいいかは、信頼できる採点者に出会えるかどうかで決まると思う。
良い講師が見つかればスクール名はどこでもいい。
ネイティブが添削したモノを他のネイティブが添削し直すなんてザラ。
君の言ってるテーマに近いものを添削してもらったものがある。
そのテーマを＋と－それぞれの視点から描いた。
参考にしてくれ。導入部分と最終段落は省く。

2019/05/04(土) 23:55:52.56

Is multiculturalism beneficial to society?

Firstly, multiculturalism can help create an environment which is not profitable to Japan as a country.
Some foreigners start illegal businesses such as unlicensed taxi companies and hostels and avoid paying taxes.
This trend may not only undermine Japanese businesses but also even Japanese business standards.
Secondly, public safety may worsen due to different ethical values. The range of ethnicities differs from country to country,
so some foreigners may use Japan as a target of their crimes. For example, several Buddha statues have been stolen
while for most Japanese people stealing is taboo. It is difficult to tighten security and, at the same, find common ground
within a group of people who do not share the same moral values.
Lastly, foreign immigrant workers could become excessive once Japan finds itself in a recession.
The economy has a cycle of prosperity and recession. When the Japanese economy recedes,
Japan may have to maintain an excessive population whom the government would have to financially support.
As a result, it will increase taxes citizens have to pay, or will accumulate more national debt.

2019/05/04(土) 23:57:39.43

Is multiculturalism beneficial to society?

Firstly, multiculturalism boosts economic growth through foreign investment and increased job opportunities.
For example, Osaka, the west gate of Japan, is bustling with foreigners nowadays.
An IR is planned to be established on an artificial island by a foreign company,
which could create more local employment.
Secondly, cross-cultural understanding benefits the Japanese. Today, many Japanese people
have to travel oversees for business, and interact with people around the world. If Japan were already multicultural,
it would be very easy for Japanese citizens to adjust to new environments.
Lastly, foreigners in Japan may spread a good reputation about Japan when returning to their home countries.
Foreigners, residents or tourists, who have good impressions, may talk to their friends in their home nations.
Today, thanks to SNS, people’s opinions change so quickly, so a sense of trust can be established
between Japanese people and foreigners without much difficulty.

2019/05/04(土) 23:59:06.56

W対策でジャパンタイムズの英作文問題完全制覇はおすすめですか？
このスレ見てると過去問だけじゃとても太刀打ち出来ないなと

2019/05/05(日) 00:12:51.74

>>938>>939
大サンクスコヽ(ﾟ｀Д´ﾟ)ﾉ
読むだけで精一杯の難しい単語もあり、これをよくライティングできるなと感心
外国人が何をやっていてそれがどう影響しているか、社会問題も把握しておかなきゃいけないからこういうのは難しいな