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Hope is what people need to live in peace. Contributing to ease the world poverty will in turn lead to reducing the number of terrorist attacks.
→ lead to reducing は lead to us reducing もしくは、 lead to reduce の方がいいような。

For these reasons, I believe developed countries must help poor countries rise from poverty. We should start today to do our share of saving people in need.

感想→230words前後かな、3つ目の理由を述べるために、2つ目の理由を削る必要があるかと思う。単語のミスもないし、理由も明確で表現もいいと思った。

指摘に間違いがあればよろしく