(´・ω・｀)添削しといたよ

Hm ... I'm tired of living now ... ('ω'`)
I'm going to commit suicide because I can't be happy anymore ... ('ω'`)
Hm ... I'm gradually becoming less conscious ... ('ω'`)
Kiran
Hmm…! ? ('ω'`)
this is! ? "Arks Star" (brand name) now on sale at SE8000 style for 18,000 yen (tax included)! ? ('ω'`)
I'm gloomy, and my heart, which has become negative thinking, is getting rid of silver! ? ('ω'`)
When I saw this "Arks Star" (brand name), I felt like I'll try again from tomorrow ('ω'`)
This is buying ('ω'`)
ttp://imgur.com/uplhYeN.jpg
ttp://ebten.jp/sega/p/4974365722876/