型はわかっている　思い出したセンテンスを羅列したから読みずらいのはわかる。
今修正すると

there are several reasons why i believe so
first
now the 40% of the working people are part time workers
30% of the people have no savings in the bank.japan is technically between a rock and a hard place.
on the contrary companies have made out like bandits.
they have a lot of money　in retailed earnings sitting in the bank.
those money does not go to workers ,does not go to shareholders.
so many workers live from paycheck to paycheck,especiallypart time workers
second
abenomics has worked , but it worked in a funny way.
it has worked for corporations.
because the government is bought and paid for by large companies
and labor unions.nevertherless
Mr abe is very popular , because we can not think of anybody else
to be Prime minister. that's the reason.
we have to hammer this home that structural reform is important.
it is deflationary but it is for the future.

in conclusion,in terms of the economy,japan is ostensively in the doldrums.
there is a significant number of suicides of young workers.
the government has to step in .sometimes they have to go out on a limb to do something that
probably is best for the country.
otherwise we might end up having to move to other countries.
スピーチはライティングと違って戻れない。文法も甘くなる.ネイティブだろうがとっちらかる瞬間は何度もある。