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It had already become dark when I went out for a walk with my dog.
Trees were swaying in the wind, and Stars were twinkling in the sky.
While we were walking, I had the impression that the the sound of the woods, which would have been ordinary in the daytime, had changed since it was night time.
All around us, leaves were talking in whispers, branches were chatting, and trunks of trees were moaning in pain as if they were old men who were preparing to go to bed.
The woods had always shown me their beauty, but they created a somewhat gloomy atmosphere tonight.
Both my dog and I were quite relieved when we returned to my house.