【英検1級・準1級】英作文を添削し合うスレ
https://lavender.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/english/1543510584/

039 名無しさん＠英語勉強中 (ｻｻｸｯﾃﾛﾚ Sp75-7QOf) 2018/12/27 23:40:22
一応皆さんの目安になるかもと思ったので、
今年10月の英検1級で32点中26点(単語:6/8、文法:7/8、構成:6/8、内容:7/8)を取れた時の英作文を投下しますね↓

第1段落
There are so many people who say that a university degree in the humanities has lost its relevance in today's society, but I disagree with this idea.
There are three reasons to support my idea.

第2段落
The first reason is that academic fields of humanities are the basis of our ways of thinking, even if we have already graduated from universities.
For example, studying philosophy often improves our skills of critical thinking, and comparing our culture with different cultures can make our views wide.
These facts must be the evidence that academic fields of humanities are useful for us, even in today's society.

第3段落
The second reason is that academic fields of humanities are also the basis of other sciences.
For instance, history is the important aspect of examining economics, political science, and so on.
In addition, humanities often affect the way of comprehending sciences, such as physics and mathematics.
We can say that there are no sciences which are not related to humanities.