>>839

＞For example, workers generally make their presentation materials by PC to give a presentation.
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byではなくwith。ついでにPCsへ。


＞Most companies have hired more foreign people because globalization has been progressed.
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These days many companies are hiring more and more foreign people


＞If students were taught these differences, they would not be confused about these contrasts.
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仮定法にする必要が無いので、普通の時制で書けば良い


＞These two reasons stated above, I think there are some improvement points in terms of the curriculum and globalization in Japanese high school.
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最初にforが必要。その後は
I think we can make some improvements in the curriculum and globalization in Japanese high school
と書けば良い