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ありがとう！英作文が取れればR, Lで失敗しても救えるし、Wで失敗したら取り戻すのは難しいから確実に抑えたいんだ
指摘のあった2段落目を書き直してみた。
(II) First of all, children can learn many things such as the importance of lives and nature by touching many kinds of animals.
However, they can see only a few species in their daily lives.
Zoos make it easy for children to see a large number of different kinds of animals.
This is why zoos are vital places for the education of children.