0090名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ db0b-FHmN)
2018/09/01(土) 12:32:13.20ID:/9ur0Oj40僕だったらこう書くかな。
(僕のが正しいとは言ってない。)
I feel there are left some places it's better to
modify. But, the present version is far better than
the previous. It's sure I don't feel it so much difficult
in seeing what you intends to say.