Agree or disagree: A lack of women’s right is a serious problem in Japan.
I disagree. A lack of women’s right is not a serious problem in Japan. Certainly, many women choose to go to junior colleges rather than universities, but this is not because of discrimination but as a result of their active choice. In general, men have heavy responsibilities to sustain families. Therefore, many men have to make themselves high speck, so they have to study hard even though they do not like to study. On the other many women can be wives, so not always do not need to be highly educated. Men cannot become househusbands. Women have more choices than men. Not being educated in college is their active choice in many cases. Women, who have strong will do not give up no matter what oppositions retort. Many high schools regulate their student’ school uniforms and hair styles, but many female students try to break the rules to make them look cool. Women do not give up. Women, who really want to go to universities, study hard to make their dream come true. Women, who want to become career women, do not give up dreams. Certainly, a good environment for women who want to be promoted in companies should be established, but it is also true that many wives in Japan are powerful in their families since they can manage family finance, so I do not believe a lack of women’s right is serious in Japan. The most serious problem is low birthrates and high rate of divorce for the past 3 decades. As a result, women’s right as wives and mothers is not protected. Rather, we should analyze the reasons to pursue what is happiness. 0010名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ d75f-jQo9)2019/05/09(木) 00:51:49.55ID:0f2g0+B30 上のは添削してもらう前のド下手な文章だった。 あの講師、添削してない元の英文を送ってきてるやんけ。 すまぬ。 0011名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ d75f-jQo9)2019/05/09(木) 01:04:26.88ID:0f2g0+B30 間違えてコピペしたのか。何度もスマソ。これが添削後。
Agree or disagree: A lack of women’s right is a serious problem in Japan.
I disagree. A lack of women’s right is not a serious problem in Japan.
Certainly, many women choose to go to junior colleges rather than universities, but this is not because of discrimination, rather as a result of their active choice. In general, men have heavy responsibilities to sustain families. Therefore, many men have to make themselves high spec, so they have to study hard even though they do not like to study. On the other hand, many women can be wives; so don’t always need to be highly educated. Men cannot become househusbands. Women have more choices than men. Not being educated in college is their active choice in many cases. Women, who have a strong aspiration, do not give up no matter what oppositions retort. Many high schools regulate their student’ school uniforms and hairstyles, but many female students try to break the rules to make them look cool. Women do not give up. Women, who really want to go to universities, study hard to make their dream come true. Women, who want to become career women, do not give up dreams. Certainly, a good environment for women who want to be promoted in companies should be established, but it is also true that many wives in Japan are powerful in their families since they can manage family finance, so I do not believe a lack of women’s right is a serious problem in Japan. The most serious problem is low birthrates and high rate of divorce for the past 3 decades. As a result, women’s right as wives and mothers are not protected. Rather, we should analyze the reasons to pursue what is happiness. 0012名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ラクペッ MM2b-6IUN)2019/05/09(木) 07:29:44.80ID:TUQNJpBRM>>8 すごいですね! 一発合格ですか?場馴れって有効でしょうか