POINT Accident Crime Food Technology 0818名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイW 0386-lajn)2020/10/11(日) 15:00:17.08ID:4nfvxT+O0 今回part 3難しくなかった?やりながら英作文の時間なくなるかもって焦ったわ。 0819名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ミカカウィW FF27-8Ti4)2020/10/11(日) 15:02:31.02ID:1jf9P9sBF 保険金目当ての船の話は今でもありそうだと思った 0820名無しさん@英語勉強中 (テテンテンテン MM86-s6FX)2020/10/11(日) 15:05:38.65ID:M7f2G57KM it is necessary to improve public safety. there are two reasons I will present concern car accidents caused by elderly which occur frequently and the high technologies we have today. first, we have to prevent elderly people from car accidents. however it is not realistic for those people to live without driving a car because of increasing older generations and the lack of transportation in rural area. but today we have a way to solution; technology. if automatic cars, which are easier for them to drive, become common, the amount of car accidents would be dramatically decreased. for the reasons I stated above, I believe public safety should be improved by today's great technologies.
Agree or disagree: More needs to be done to improve public safety
Although public safety protects civilians as a whole at the expense of individual's freedom. It's an essential principle so as to maintain societies to properly function. I have two reasons for this.
First, internet crimes are rampant these days, which we often seen as a fast-growing threat. Internet scams and illegal transactions on the dark web are good examples. Stricter laws or harsher punishments should be applied to secure the online public safety, which then will result in less crime.
Second, falsely labeled�food products and sales of expired food are reported these days. As long as complex food supply chains exist, these issues are likely to remain, undermining food safety. We should take a drastic measure to bring about a change in the sake of public safety.
In conclusion, the change in social structures call on more public safety for emerging challenges. Thus, more needs to be done to improve public safety. 0823名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ワッチョイ 4633-NY7j)2020/10/11(日) 16:45:37.14ID:ArrEPYc+0 作文難しかった テーマが抽象的すぎて書けん 公的な安全のことかと思ったらFoodとか書いてあるし、国家レベルの安全保障のことなのか? 0824名無しさん@英語勉強中 (ササクッテロ Sp03-zjV7)2020/10/11(日) 16:47:16.56ID:fnzp1rzKp>>820 これ、結構ひどいよ まず一文が長すぎる上に変にこねくり回されて読みにくいし文法ミスもそこそこ多い。(例えばtechnologyは普通は不可算名詞なのにtechnologiesと書いてるとか)